Saturday, October 17, 2009

My New Story

This is my new story, hope you like it!

The Big Adventure! (Part 1)



Starring Ben, Sheldon, Shelbi, and Iron Man (AKA BEN)



Starting Date, October 14 2009



Story Date, October 25-27, 2009 (A.K.A. My birthday)



Location, Waimea High School, Kauai





It was Monday, October 25, It was Ben Birthday. When Ben's Mom woke him up to say happy birthday" Ben immediately jumped up and said "YES!! it's my birthday!! YEAH HOOOOOOOO!!" But Ben's day was just beginning. After he took the bus and got to school, all the teachers. (that he knew) were saying happy birthday, So were Ben's friends which, included Sheldon, Shelbi and Cady.



After School had finished he went home, glad to see his family again, and get ready for his birthday party, but just when he got home, his emergency transmitter started beeping. Wait, Wait, Wait, Stop the story! what emergency transmitter? Oh right well Ben is commander of a world wide operations called S.P.D. (Special Protectors Division) and his emergency transmitter goes off whenever there is an emergency around the world. Anyway, back to the story! His emergency transmitter started beeping, as a result he ran home and jumped into his closet, pushed a button, then dropped 100 ft. down into his lab which he called the armory “Suit up!!” He Yelled, then a machine dropped from the roof, grabbed Ben, and pulled him up, up, up, all while this was happening Ben, was getting suited up in his standard iron man armor, then the machine opened and blasted him into the air, then his boot jets activated, and he soared through the sky.



Once Ben was high enough, he said “computer, status report” “The Crimson Dynamo has been spotted in a downtown area on the island of Hawaii” stated the computer, "Sheldon!" Yelled Ben. "I Should have known he wouldn't keep his word" (editors note: in a previous edition, Sheldon AKA the crimson dynamo promised not to appear as the crimson dynamo again, because of the havoc he had caused) "Computer, increase speed to 100 knots!" "Increasing speed"





As soon as Ben arrived on Hawaii, he immediately saw the crimson dynamo. "Sheldon! boy did I miss you, hey look you got a new dynamo bot, nice, nice, what was it that happened to your old one? Oh right, it got blown up fighting me!" "Iron Man!" Sheldon Sneered, "you got in my way once, but it won't happen again" "Why didn't you keep your promise?" "Well, after i made that promise i realized it's much more fun being a bad guy! so have a taste of my dynamo's powers!" Then the dynamo raised it's arm and a laser canon popped out and fired. It hit iron man like a ton of bricks and slammed him into the ground. Then Iron Man got up a blasted the dynamo with his repulsers. (lasers) Then the dynamo grabbed him and smashed him against a wall 10 times. During this the armor said "Shields at 2% Primary Protocol Initiated, Returning to Armory" Then the iron man armor autopilot system took over and flew ben back to his lab. "I won!!" yelled Sheldon.





As soon as ben got back to the armory, he was surprised to see shelbi waiting for him. (editor's note: shelbi knows ben is iron man!) "Where have you been? Your Birthday Party is almost ready!!" She Yelled "Crimson Dynamo.... New Armor... To strong" "What?! The Crimson Dynamo, How are you gonna beat him?" She asked. "With This" Ben Said...... "Whoa" Said shelbi. Standing 10 feet tall was a super pumped up version of the iron man armor, built with schematics ben got from his last fight with the crimson dynamo. "What do you call it?" She asked "I call it the dynamo buster, listen i need you to cover for me until i get back" "What?! I can't do that!" "Shelbi, come on" said ben, "I need to defeat the crimson dynamo" "Ok" Said Shelbi. "I'll cover for you" "Thanks" Said Ben as he climbed into the dynamo buster.




"Welcome to the Iron Man Dynamo Armor Version 7.4 The system is now booting, Please Wait" "Come On" groaned Ben. "System Boot Successful" Armor Power At 100% "Activate Propulsion System's, take me to the crimson dynamo" Ben Said


Whoosh!! Went the armor. "Ben, it's Shelbi, were are you?" "Uh, In the air, I thought you were supposed to be stalling for me." Well, I was, but now everyone's looking for you, i had to run back to the armory to check if you were still there, but you had already left" "Well, thats a problem" Ben Said. "No kidding, get back as fast as you can" "Allright, Allright, I'll be right there. I just need to get sheldon outto here." "Well Hurry" "All right" Besides, i'm already here, computer, shut down communications with the armory" "Shutting down" "But...." Shelbi's voice was cut off. "Dynamo!!" Yelled Ben. "Iron Man? I thought I finished you" "Well you thought wrong, get out of that armor!" "Not going to happen, you think i wasn't ready for you? think again. Delphi, fire top laser! " "Firing" "AHHHHH!!" Yelled Ben, who was hit with a localized EMP (Electro Magnetic Pulse) and fell backwords. The EMP had deactivated the armors functions. So all system's were powered down. During this the dynamo walked up to ben and said "Well, well, well, the invincible iron man, not so invincible anymore." "Come On, Reboot!! Reboot!!" "Welcome to the Iron Man Dynamo Armor Version 7.4 The system as encountered an unknown error and is now rebooting, Please Wait" Then the
Dynamo's Arm Transformed into a laser cannon and started charging. "This is gonna hurt" Ben Said. "Reboot Successful" Then he sat of and gave a shot out of his unibeam, which hit the dynamo armor so hard, it knocked sheldon out of it. Then Ben gave another blast and destroyed the dynamo armor. "YES!! computer, reopen communication with the armory" "Communications Reistablished" "BEN, BEN, are you there?" "yeah, i'm here and i'm headed home." "Ok good"



So afted that ben headed home, had his party and went to bed, overall he had a good day. he had a good school day, beat dynamo and had a great party, so what next?

(To Be Continued)